Monday, 9 January 2017

LO4 - Revised Script


These are the changes that both me and Alex made after gaining feedback from the writers group. There is a key of what the colours respond to on the bottom page.


















These images below show the progress of what both me and Alex have written showing a few pages work. In purple are the changes/updates Alex had made, and in blue/green are the changes that I had made.











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